Bearing in mind I have no idea what anyone is 'supposed' to look like, I think she looks fine, but, well, cartoony in both. I like the scribbling effect, but I would want to smooth out the scribbles more if I were the one doing these artses.

Are her lips supposed to be that color, or am I missing something? I feel so lost.

And this is making me desperately want to get my art out and start making pictures again.

Stasia